Monday, January 22, 2018

Feedback/Revisions

I have received feedback on my first magazine submission. With this feedback, I am hoping to improve my project. Mr. Elsbree gave me feedback on my front cover to move around titles and maybe add more article titles. For my table of contents, he told me I should add more articles and their page numbers which I was feeling I should do before he talked to me. For my two-page article, I should brand my page numbers, decrease white space, and add a photo of the person I interviewed. This feedback is very helpful and I will definitely adjust my magazine to reach this criteria.

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Final Submission

Front Cover Table of Contents  1st Page of Two Page Article  2nd Page of Two Page Article